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Thursday 29 October 2015

Recount Scaffold



Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
“Check” I yell as I get my friend sol in check while playing chess. Sol put up a good match in chess unfortunately I came out as the victor though. Then we went to our trip.





Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives
Sol, me,Youthtown Panmure and Youthtown Pakuranga went to Extreme Entertainment. I had some money so I bought Sol and I a lift +. He enjoyed it alot.I enjoyed it and it was delicious.

He was cool to hang around with. We played heaps of games at Extreme Entertainment. They were so fun and we cheated in one. It said two players but we had 3 - 4 players.

On our way back to Youthtown in panmure someone brought their phone to Youthtown and played the eminem song. Sol was a rapper so he sang along. I called Sol eminem jr because he was that good.

After we got back to Youthtown we played dodgeball. Some kids did craft and some others did cooking. There two sessions in each group. I used both on dodgeball.

Three Step Dodgeball was a good game. When it came to throwing balls don’t get hit by mine and that’s all i’m going to say. I wish I could go to Extreme entertainment again but with my family instead and maybe Sol.

I had a blast at Extreme and look already got a nickname for it. I hope Sol had a blast I wonder if Sol won. On the bottom of the lift + cans there are codes to see if you won 5,000 but I don’t have a phone so I can’t text it 811.   
Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.




I felt amazing and sad at the same time. I felt amazing because I had great time. I felt sad because I didn't have a phone to text to 811. But I had a great time at Extreme.

xtra math


Monday 19 October 2015

Brainstorm on physical working

xtra math

I am getting better and sometimes worse But I wish to get better in the future because I want to be brainy because in the mean time I'm not everything but smart I want to get to the subtraction level because I have not been on subtraction once

Friday 16 October 2015

xtra maths

this is my xtra math im am slowly getting worse but in the future I wish to be beter at xtra math

Monday 12 October 2015

My painting reflection

Art Still Life Reflection
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  1. What are you most pleased with? Why / why not?
I am most pleased with my orange because that took some trouble to make but practice makes perfect





2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I learnt how to sketch well and paint badly and get it all over the sketching







3. What did you find easy?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines

sketching



4. What did you find difficult?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines

painting



5. Who did helped you with your still life painting?
Miss Paton



6. What would you change? why / why not?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines

The apple




7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time?
I would learn to be a better pinter in life and paint things well unlike my apple I screwed up with